Friday, September 16, 2011

AMORETTI, SONNET #75 By Edmund, rewritten.

This doesn't matter
to me, people. Old
people should not tell anyone how to
love. Love is always-
                 evolving.
      The love melissa 
makes,
i make. Our love is not any body's love. A
community of two, like blowfish.

2 comments:

Melissa said...

"Me and You are masterpieces lit on fire and left to join the wind."

-taken from my 2010 poem titled "You need acid to write poetry. We need a pencil."

We aren't meant to get old. We will die and live again in another state, and as one.

Charlieepy said...

thats a great idea. two people love each other so much that they become the same person in the next life.
so we may we multiple people already